“Not Quite Romeo” A short Story

25 05 2010

This short story was written purely for the fun of it. It’s meant to be ironic.Not Quite Romeo[1]




3 responses

25 05 2010

That was funny. And cute. I loved how “Fey” reminded me of Tina Fey on 30 Rock. Good stuff.

27 05 2010

This story is great. It’s great irony and good writing. I think it could be expanded, though. Add some descriptions and maybe a little more background. But that’s just a suggestion. It’s good, as is, though.

27 05 2010
Amy Parker

That was great! omg so unexpected! wow, i’m still in shock. Nice work, your plot was very very strong and very well done, nice job.

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